Practise point first writing. Judges will understand your chain of reasoning more easily if they see how one sentence connects to the next sentence. Finally, sentences are frequently too long.
If we have to, we will bend the law to reach a fair result.
To avoid the left- handed sentence either do a flip-flop by putting the dependent clause at the end of the sentence instead of at the beginning, or put the introductory clause into a separate sentence. The judge should be able to read it on its own without having to refer to the appellant's factum.
In other words summarize what the judge can expect or at least entice the judge into the quotation by introductory words. Pretend the judge is just your well-informed next door neighbour.
However, I have a few suggestions that apply particularly to the respondent's factum: i The respondent's factum should be self-contained or free-standing. But counsel must carefully consider what story to tell and how to tell it. In this case the element of vulnerability is missing because abcetc.